tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1466363943080001340.post6152255926221321268..comments2023-05-31T00:25:33.828-07:00Comments on Drums & Bells: the great machine from hologram of baalfandorinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06507099771869890868noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1466363943080001340.post-58655256151390539272013-12-23T04:40:29.031-08:002013-12-23T04:40:29.031-08:00barbera, i'm a terrible editor, i know. to be ...barbera, i'm a terrible editor, i know. to be perfectly honest it's something that's beyond me, hence my stream of consciousness takes over when i write, i read a lot and play around with lots of writing styles but my editing skills are shocking. i'll try to use punctuation correctly but i wouldn't hold your breath, i blame my maths teacher ironically as he traumatised me captain missionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13465482384803674356noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1466363943080001340.post-3611879586845593352013-11-03T01:41:26.788-08:002013-11-03T01:41:26.788-08:00Your writing is interesting and oftimes beautiful,...Your writing is interesting and oftimes beautiful, but please PLEASE start using periods. You have terrible run on sentences that take away from the quality of your words. Hope you don't mind me saying this, but it was really getting to me as I read.Barbara/myth makerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08606854813691778835noreply@blogger.com